Anything that has the word "discombobulated" needs an extra star.Love this kind of writing, and the inner thoughts were so believable. Great to see the way she handled the growing up always aware you were different in a white society. Where colour of skin matters. The father being disabled, but that was just a fact of life. So many stereotypes introduced but dealt with. Intelligent, hot writing at its best."Shouldn't you have picked something you didn't like, to make sure there were no, um inadvertent exclamations at an important moment?"He dropped his hand and stared at Sam. "Who screams out 'lemonade' in the middle of sex?" Can we have Sam's story next please?