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Spanking for Love

Spanking for Love - John Simpson I'm not going to describe what happens in this book as other reviewers have done that quite well.I am going to comment on the standard of the editing/writing.I've never read a published book that contains so many simple errors.Typos are one thing, but getting people's names back to front" Not just once but twice? In such a short book with a minimum number of characters, it is inexcusable.As Mark positioned himself by lying down on the cloth and moving his feet alongside the picnic table legs, Tad worked quickly to secure Mark so he couldn't move. When he was satisfied, he said, "Okay, try and get out of the restraints and ropes."Tad tried to move around and pulled on the ropes, they were knotted like Tad knew what he was doing, tied to the rings and around his wrists so he couldn't move at all. His feet were very secure as well.The last paragraph should read Mark tried to move around...Okay, one mistake, slip of the keyboard but then moments later:Mark peeled off his shorts and let his semi-erection pop up free. He took the belt from the table and walked around to the rear of the table. There he pulled down the Calvin Klein's covering Mark's beautiful ass. They would only go down so far because Mark's legs were spread. He would remember that when they had Eddie in that position.Uh, sorry it should read Tad peeled off his shorts. Mark was already trussed like a turkey....These weren't the only mistakes.The writing style is very elementary, other reviewers have commented on the BDSM angle, so I won't repeat what they said except to say that I agree with them and really abhor the fact that there was no concept of safe words.I'm interested to see if other books by the author are as bad or did this one just suffer from lack of a decent editor?