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Moolah and Moonshine (Petit Morts)

Moolah and Moonshine  - Jordan Castillo Price I thought this was a perfect little short story. Good balance of characterisation, an interesting premise and enough action and sex to round it off.With many short stories, I feel that the setup is great, but that's all there is. This one had a good balance between setup and resolution. Sure, there could have been more of all aspects, but we had enough to cover the story that JCP wanted to tell.Some reviewers were thrown by the twist, but let's face it, the whole Chance and the chocolate shop concept is fantastical, so why not continue the theme?